- October 25th, 2023, 10:16 pm#4986918
I feel like this is GBA in a nutshell. The kids put on the Ghostbusters uniforms because…why? It’s one more thing that feels like they just did because it’s ghostbusters and well, we gotta have them wearing the suits! Which…ok! But give me something.
Of course they are just put on so the audience can see the kids in uniform. That’s about the extent of the thought seemingly put into it. But character wise? Story wise? Why?
It’s stuff like this that could be fixed so easy with dialogue. The movie is full of moments like this. Things happen not organically
It just could’ve taken something as simple as:
Lucky:Wait. Ew. Why are you putting that thing on? It’s like 40 years old. It probably has old man sweat in it!
Podcast: Cause we’re freakin Ghostbusters now & they look awesome! Plus..look(points to padding) incase we fall on our elbows or knees! Safety first!
Trevor: He’s right. Let’s suit up
Lucky: safety first? You’re worried about elbows & knees when We’ll be walking around with a miniaturized nuclear reactors on our …oh forget it.
Cut to them zipping up the suits
Podcast(in mock fashion show): And here we have podcast looking handsome & fabulous wearing the latest in paranormal investigation & elimination attire. The tanned khaki Aesthetic says “Yeah we’ll take care of your ghost problem and won’t charge an arm and a leg for it”
Phoebe: Very chic & surprisingly comfortable.
Lucky: Oh god. They they smell!
Podcast(whispers to Pheobe): Probably the old man sweat
Trevor: Spenglers don’t sweat
Both Pheobe & Trevor at the same time: We glisten!
Phoebe and Lucky head out of the room
Podcast looks at Trevor
Podcast: You think these things might be radioactive?
Trevor shrugs his shoulders
As they all leave they pass a photo of the original team wearing their jumpsuits after the battle with Gozer in ‘84. Hold on that photo as we CUT
*****
Something simple like that. Just acknowledging the “wait why bother with the suits” of it all. In the movie they just put them on for no reason and without comment. These are teenagers! They aren’t going to not comment on how old and /or cool something is.
Of course they are just put on so the audience can see the kids in uniform. That’s about the extent of the thought seemingly put into it. But character wise? Story wise? Why?
It’s stuff like this that could be fixed so easy with dialogue. The movie is full of moments like this. Things happen not organically
It just could’ve taken something as simple as:
Lucky:Wait. Ew. Why are you putting that thing on? It’s like 40 years old. It probably has old man sweat in it!
Podcast: Cause we’re freakin Ghostbusters now & they look awesome! Plus..look(points to padding) incase we fall on our elbows or knees! Safety first!
Trevor: He’s right. Let’s suit up
Lucky: safety first? You’re worried about elbows & knees when We’ll be walking around with a miniaturized nuclear reactors on our …oh forget it.
Cut to them zipping up the suits
Podcast(in mock fashion show): And here we have podcast looking handsome & fabulous wearing the latest in paranormal investigation & elimination attire. The tanned khaki Aesthetic says “Yeah we’ll take care of your ghost problem and won’t charge an arm and a leg for it”
Phoebe: Very chic & surprisingly comfortable.
Lucky: Oh god. They they smell!
Podcast(whispers to Pheobe): Probably the old man sweat
Trevor: Spenglers don’t sweat
Both Pheobe & Trevor at the same time: We glisten!
Phoebe and Lucky head out of the room
Podcast looks at Trevor
Podcast: You think these things might be radioactive?
Trevor shrugs his shoulders
As they all leave they pass a photo of the original team wearing their jumpsuits after the battle with Gozer in ‘84. Hold on that photo as we CUT
*****
Something simple like that. Just acknowledging the “wait why bother with the suits” of it all. In the movie they just put them on for no reason and without comment. These are teenagers! They aren’t going to not comment on how old and /or cool something is.